Ok my opinion...
Ok, I liked the story, it reminded me ok Stephen King's book The Mist. Overall the flash's gameplay was good too although some things were way too hard, like for instance finding the deodorant -____-...
Anyway what I didnt like was the religious referance at the end, but hell what do I expect of someone who's screen name is godlimations XD.
Anyway nice flash! Oh, and BTW the whole "My child died by being runned over while playing ball" thing was a lil' bit cliche...